Globalization is a phenomenon which has impacted the lives of people
around the world. Most countries embrace the idea of globalization as it
brings about economic growth, improving the living standards of people. Although globalization has enhanced trade, the free
market system undertaken by many countries, as well as the
influx of multinational companies into developing countries such as
Nigeria, the support for globalization has weakened in western countries
like the US and Italy. People are worried about the negative effects of
globalization, which include environmental pollution, loss of
traditions and widening income gaps in countries like Indonesia.
Environmental problems like global warming is a major
concern in countries and people surveyed are willing to trade a cleaner
environment for economic growth. The influx of immigrants
has caused the loss of traditions in many countries; 44 out of 47
countries believe that immigrants bring negative impacts to
their countries. One good example is Italy, with 64 percent of the
people rating immigration a big problem for their country. Hence, one way of measuring the effects of globalization is to consider the positive and
negative impacts in different countries.
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Thanks for letting me know I'd overlooked it Kai Wei, and apologies for the delay.
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Its ok no worries
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