Critical Reflection: Essay Writing (Final Final after editing)

Essay writing has never been an easy task for me. In the past, I had a phobia of writing essays, due to the mediocre results that I always received. Disappointed, I started questioning myself about the reasons, because even though my ideas and content were competent, my grades did not meet my expectations.

When the course began I was determined to find out what was really wrong with my essays. With the invaluable advice of my helpful instructor, I have learned about the appropriate grammar for essay writing, the usage of words, and how certain words might be inappropriate for academic purposes. In order to enhance our learning experiences and our interpersonal learning skills, he also introduced interactive teaching methods such as blogging. After going though the various lessons , I have realized that the organization structures of my essays were not always very well defined in the past. Thus, the conveying of my message to the reader was hindered. Through this course, I have learned to organize my essays so that my thoughts will flow coherently.

In the future, I will spend five minutes on essay planning before embarking on the essay.  In order to prevent myself from using inappropriate words, I will ask my friends to proofread my essay to make sure that the errors are minimized, and most importantly, ensure that the content is understandable. Additionally, to improve my language structure, I will read academic works and newspapers regularly.

Through numerous assignments , I have realized the two most important things that I have to improve on: organization and grammar. Although this course is too short for improvements to be seen in terms of essay writing, I believe that with the language tools that I have acquired, I will be able to improve my essay writing skills, which will benefit me greatly in my future course of work.

Critical Reflection: Essay Writing (Draft 1)

Essay writing had always been a difficult task throughout my life. In the past, I have a phobia in writing essays as the result I got from writing essays are bad. I was disappointed with myself so I started questioning myself why, as I do have great ideas and content in writing the essays.

When I first started this course I was determined to find out what is really wrong with my essays. During this course with my helpful instructor I had learned correct grammar for essay writing, the usage of words, and how certain words might be rude to the reader. He has introduced interactive ways like blogging to enhance our learning experiences and our interpersonal learning skill. Throughout this course, I find that the organization structure of my essay is always not very well defined in the past. Therefore the message in my past essays could not be conveyed to my reader. In this course, I have learned to organize my essay so that my thoughts will flow coherently in my essay.

Through the practices that I had in this course, I began to realize what is the most important thing I need to improve on which is organization structure and

Grammar. This course is too short for I to have great improvements in terms of essay writing, but I believe with the language tools I have achieved from this course I will be able to improve my essay writing in the future. One habit, which I cultivated from this course, is before the start of any essay I will spend 5 minutes planning the structure of it.

Globalization Essay, Problems and Solutions (Final Final Final)

Globalization is one of the most important driving forces of today’s economic growth. The world has been integrated closer as interactivity increases between borders. Compared to the past, traveling across the globe is an effortless affair. With the aid of Information Communication Technology, people can even communicate without having to travel. Economic activities like business meetings, the trading of goods and financial securities, such as, stocks and bonds have been enhanced with the Internet. However, globalization has negatively affected the world too. The integration of countries has caused systemic risk, defined as the adverse effect of an interconnected market, which can lead to the breakdown of the world’s financial system (Bernanke, 2009). This can be seen during the 1997 Asian financial crisis and the 2008 global financial crisis. Even though globalization has undoubtedly improved inter-countries’ trading and financial relationships, countries have ironically become more vulnerable to negative impacts of the economic system due to the close ties they share. Singapore shows how good governance and economic fundamentals can mitigate systemic risk, through two main solutions "Better institution and government policies", and "Good economic fundamentals".

Good governance will be able to protect the economy from unnecessary risks by implementing good policies. Goldin (2012) states that regulatory institutions need to improve themselves with the ever-changing dynamics of globalization to maximize gain and minimize losses. Governments need to ensure that citizens are well protected, as they are the main victims during a crisis. For instance, increasing immigration due to the forces of globalization has caused Singapore's housing prices to rise drastically. Investors have taken advantage of this situation and raised the housing prices to gain profit. This results in a huge housing bubble in the market and a crisis may occur if the bubble were to burst. In fact, this happened in America during the global financial crisis of 2008. Hence, to stop the growing housing prices, the Singapore government implemented cooling measures policies to ease the situation. Additionally, a competent government should have good foresight to safeguard its country from crisis. Therefore collaborating and sharing perspectives of good institution and governance between government bodies, which allow the levels of governance to be comparable, are essential to reduce negative shocks from happening around the world. In order to minimize systemic risks, individual government needs to do its part in ensuring that the risk of negative impacts in its economy is at its minimum, to prevent other countries from being affected.

The inevitability of systemic risk makes good economic fundamentals important to countries as they can use them to take advantage of crisis situations. During the global financial crisis 2008, Singapore was the first country in ASEAN to be affected due to systemic risk. With good economic fundamentals, however, Singapore managed to recover quickly with a growth of 14.5% in 2010 (CIA World Fact book, 2011).  It also seized the opportunity during the economic downturn to retrain its workers and restructure new industries during this period, taking advantage of the low production cost (Thangavelu, 2009). One example is during the period of financial crisis, the Singapore government introduced the workfare training support scheme to retrain its workers. While fighting against systemic risk is definitely not an easy task, countries could work together in sharing information on how fundamentals like taxation, exports and imports structures and employments structure of the economy should be built. Therefore, summits like the East Asia summit in 2013 are very important. One good example is during the recent summit, APEC leaders agreed to increase the economic opportunities for women through skills building. It is important for individual countries to increase their transparency in terms of their economic health in order for other countries to learn from them. The sharing of information is important for countries to build strong fundamentals for the economy to take advantage of crisis situations so that economies do not need to face extended period of recessions.

In conclusion, systemic risk is unavoidable as globalization occurs and countries integrate. Good government policies could help prevent citizens from suffering in a crisis, and building up good fundamentals of the economy could potentially save it from being affected for prolonged periods of time. Individual governments should weigh the positive and negative effects of globalization and decide if certain restrictions like trade tariffs against the forces of globalization should be set up.

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